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The fur pile that used to be on my shepherd

A dad shows week-one versus week-six of using a deshedding comb on his German shepherd: tumbleweeds of fur on the floor, then a ten-minute patio session and a clean hallway.

Example product
Coatwise — A stainless deshedding comb with a curved blade that pulls loose undercoat without cutting the top coat
Audience
Owners of double-coated breeds during shedding season
Creator
Suburban dad and shepherd owner, early 50s

Variables — swap these for your product

{{PRODUCT_NAME}} = the Coatwise comb{{SESSION_TIME}} = ten minutes{{OFFER}} = free second comb with any order

01 · hook

Tumbleweed hallway

0–3s

“Week one. This was daily.”

Tumbleweed hallway. Vertical 9:16 UGC clip, 3 seconds, one continuous handheld take unless timecodes say cut.
References: @Image1 = creator reference; @Image2 = setting reference. Keep the person, wardrobe and room identical to the references.
0–3s: Low WS push-in. Fur tumbleweeds drift on floor; man with broom shrugs.
Vertical 9:16 handheld shot, low angle along a light oak hallway floor in morning light. Clumps of black-and-tan fur drift across the boards like tumbleweeds. a 52-year-old South Asian man with salt-and-pepper hair, a trimmed grey beard, a navy quarter-zip fleece and khaki shorts steps into frame holding a broom, looks down at the floor, then at the lens with a tired shrug and says: "Week one. This was daily." a large black-and-tan German shepherd with a thick double coat trots past in the background. Slow push forward along the floor, natural daylight from a doorway, shot on iPhone, vertical 9:16, unpolished home video.
Dialogue (Suburban dad and shepherd owner, early 50s): "Week one. This was daily."
No subtitles. No on-screen text. No logos. Natural voice, no background music.
duration
4 s
aspect ratio
9:16
resolution
1080p (720p where the API caps it)
generate audio
true
references
@Image1: creator, @Image2: setting
first frame
creator reference

Shot list

  1. 0.0–3.0sLow WS push-in. Fur tumbleweeds drift on floor; man with broom shrugs

On-screen text (overlay in edit)

week 1 of shedding season:

Audio

Western whistle sting as a joke, then room tone

References

02 · demo

Patio session

3–13s

3 shots, 3 model prompts, settings and captions in the full library.

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03 · proof

Week six

13–23s

2 shots, 3 model prompts, settings and captions in the full library.

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04 · cta

Hand it over

23–30s

2 shots, 3 model prompts, settings and captions in the full library.

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Why it works

The before/after is about the floor, not the dog's body, so it stays platform-safe while still giving a dramatic two-state contrast. Matching the hook's low hallway angle in week six makes the change instantly readable, and the fur pile is tangible proof of what the comb removes.

Hook variants to A/B test

  • “Shedding season in my house, week one.”
  • “I used to sweep this hallway twice a day.”
  • “This is how much dog came off one German shepherd.”

Reference images

  • creator

    Creator in the navy fleece beside the German shepherd, daylight, full body

  • product

    The deshedding comb from the side showing the curved blade, plus in-hand

  • setting

    Two plates: the light oak hallway shot from floor height, and the stone patio with wooden bench

  • endcard

    Logo, comb cut-out and offer

Creator look (paste into your image model)

Man, 52, South Asian, salt-and-pepper hair, trimmed grey beard, navy quarter-zip fleece, khaki shorts, rubber garden clogs; black-and-tan German shepherd. Back patio on a sunny Saturday morning with grey stone pavers and a wooden bench; light oak hallway inside for the before shot.

Model notes, last verified 2026-10-16: Provisional: written to Kling 3.0 conventions (3.0-compatible) until 4.0 publishes its own. 3, 5 or 10 s only; audio always on; add captions in post.

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